Roll A Story

By Anonymous -

 This week instead of doing our constellation doc we are doing our whoogle. Whoogle is our whetu google where we had all of this stuff on a slide and we have to do it. this week we had a Roll A Story for our can-dos. We had to get a dice and roll it and we had a lot of options I rolled a rabbit camp and got eaten by a snake. Here is my story... 



“ Good night my lonely self”. A few minutes later... “Ahhhhh have to go to the toilet” Russel Russel “what was that? I think I will go this way instead and dig a long drop. Crack! Ahhhh! This is more creepy than I thought. Russel, hey hello anyone there.  Hello, Sunny something said mysteriously. Ahhh mummmmm. Help!! What is that you are mum yeah it's mum. Please stop mum I need to be a loan I don't think you would want to see this… But I am not mother  the thing said. Then who are you? Come out and show yourself. If you say so. The thing said again. Russel Russel. Ahhhhhhhh!! Mummy snake. I am only a little kid I am only four please let me live. Pant pant pant pant. Mum are you inside. “ I have to keep going...   



Pant pant. “ I am still behind you. “ MUM” something is behind me please help! “ That is right little girl run for your life”!  Right now is the time to do a cool trick said sunny. Lucky bunnies can do jumps and flip and so. Ha! Sunny said Owww The snake screeched. “ Sorry It’s just that you are trying to eat me”! Kick Kick. ! “what are you doing? I am threatening you by trying to kick you. “ Alright, kid I am just trying to eat a snack off you. Do you have a snack? “Ummm? Oh yeah, I do come with me!” Hop Hop slither. I’ll just bend down and get it for you. Slash. Sorry kid I was hungry really hungry.    

Comments

  1. Anonymous17 September 2020 at 17:07

    I love the story and the, Slash. Sorry kid I was hungry really hungry. Part! Karawe!

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    1. Anonymous17 September 2020 at 17:10

      Thank you Maddie. Yours sounds fun to

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  2. Anonymous17 September 2020 at 17:12

    that is so cool and funny
    laughing lots Scarlett

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  3. Anonymous17 September 2020 at 17:14

    Amazing story Marley. I also love the part. Sorry kid I was Hungry really hungry.

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  4. Anonymous17 September 2020 at 17:15

    Ka pai I like all the describing words you added in. lily

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  5. Anonymous17 September 2020 at 17:15

    Karawa Marley! I love your Roll a Story! I agree with Scarlett It's so funny LOL! Taylor

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  6. HayleyG18 September 2020 at 09:15

    Hi Marley. I thought it was a very good story too. Very descriptive and interesting. Karawe! Maybe though you could add in your punctuation that you’ve been practising? I think that would be helpful to the story.

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